23.2.07

prisoner

A thin ray of light
piercing through my world,
a ray of hope
a path to freedom,
a getaway from the dark
and separation from the pain.

Faint memories,
Frozen body , frozen mind,
frozen thoughts,
Prisoner inside my cocoon
wrapped all around,
Silence,silence,silence
darkness all around.

9 Comments:

Blogger net-net4 said...

Hi from France...
Nice poems here...
I invite you to visit my blog...
I edit 2 fotos daily and if you leave me a little poem or a funny comment i will edit it in the frontal page next to the pictures...
Read you

3:27 am  
Blogger net-net4 said...

Bonjour Fakir...
I was happy to find your nice comment...
You can send me your poetic thoughts directly to the blog...
Peace

12:23 am  
Anonymous बेनामी said...

thats a nice one
liked it very much

2:46 am  
Anonymous बेनामी said...

voww...beautiful lines!

10:16 am  
Blogger Rai said...

Silence,silence,silence

nice expressions. Have you seen you are tagged?

1:14 pm  
Blogger cosmic clown said...

hey guys thanks for ur encouraging comments....
@Raghav...liked ur blog too,hope to see more of you in future..
@white forest...Liked the way you put ur thoughts in your blog....

Rai,Yeah my thoughts are running in one direction...!

hope to break away from that....

12:58 AM

2:29 pm  
Blogger Rai said...

No post????

write!write! write!

3:31 pm  
Blogger Priyankari said...

Nice thoughts again! We all truly are prisoners trapped within our cocoons.

9:53 pm  
Blogger cosmic clown said...

thank you Priyankari....for ur beautiful comment.....hope to see u put more stuffs in ur blog.....keep creating.......

6:12 pm  

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