18.4.07

"watching those drops of rain"

As the misty dark cloud covered the night
little drizzle, like tear drops, tenderly
falling from the dark sky,
no sign of those yellow stars
no sign of silvery moon tonight,
probably hiding somewhere
for reasons unknown;
As I lay beneath this wood ,
watching those drops of rain,drops of tear
I remember those moments with you,
An eagerly awaited rendezevous
after some seven stars and seven moon
both speechless and shy, only
a smile, a precious smile from you
expressed everything on your side;
Sitting on a bench in that leafy green park
as the cloud gathered dark,
beneath the oak,beneath the pine
sharing a flowery umbrella
drizzling drop by drop
time passed by
flowing like the river
neither you nor could I freeze time forever;
As I lay beneath this wood tonight
watching those drops of rain,drops of tear
I remember those moments with you;
Sensing the pain of the dark sky tonight
watching those drops of rain,drops of tear
silence and only silence
we passed the night consoling each other.

14 Comments:

Blogger Lady divine said...

wow.... nice...
Made me feel how much we miss all the good times we've had in life...

then I thought, atleast we've had great times we can always think about and be happy..:-)

9:12 am  
Blogger Sameer Ahmed said...

the pain... beautiful, really.

9:18 pm  
Blogger mystic rose said...

beautiful!! lovely images.. and the feel.. haunting.

7:35 am  
Blogger Payal said...

am spellbound..
It gives energy to one when we rememberour good times.
Keep up. :)

1:07 am  
Blogger Patricia Paulozi Ilustrações said...

I would like to say: thanks for your visit again!!!
My friends are visiting you blog, and they are in love about your work.
Thanks for your friendship and your comments.
Bye!

and ... I'm studying english....again ....rssss....just to write better...

5:34 am  
Anonymous बेनामी said...

Wish we could really somehow freeze time...

4:00 pm  
Blogger DINTOONS said...

wow, that's really intense and moving... has a touch of the mystical...
rather, the very core of the mystical heart is love and longing...

2:29 pm  
Blogger net-net4 said...

Hi Cosmic !
I just edited your new mystic poem...
Come have a look...
I will edit new poems the thursday 7th of june so i will waiting for your new creation :)

8:01 pm  
Blogger Astraeus said...

beautiful words.. nice imagery...
will visit again

12:18 pm  
Blogger Saulo de Brito (Griffin) said...

Ei, Amigo!


Seu blog sempre composto por tão belas palavras, mensagens, é sempre um estimulo para que blogueiros como eu continue a levar tal idéia para frente.

Você deve ter percebido que gosto de comentar sobre assuntos relacionados a cinema, games e outros da área de entretenimento. Sou assim.

Tento falar um pouco sobre tudo.

Sou uma criança presa num corpo adulto. Sou um adulto cuja maturidade sedenta está para despertar.

Um grande abraço.

5:03 pm  
Blogger mystic rose said...

my own sweet way? SWEET way?

i do beleive you did not read the whole thing, sir. :P

10:30 pm  
Blogger mystic rose said...

cosmic,
thanks for the comment. :)
i thouhgt sweet as in cute , romantic. but you neednt have clarified, becos i enjoy your comments none the less.

4:47 am  
Blogger mystic rose said...

write some more. are you busy?

6:12 am  
Blogger net-net4 said...

Hi Cosmic Clown !
How is going ?
Nice melancolic feeling in your last poem...
I add it in the front page...
Thanks...read you soon :)

12:25 pm  

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